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Haori-Hakama Wear

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haori-hakama is an type of kimono that used to be only for men but now are uni-sex

Media: Copic Markers

Ugh. the hands really bug me. And I think I could of done better with the clothing. Like making it feel like cloth flapping in the wind or something.
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The first thing I noticed was the color rendition, not excessively cured, but good enough to intrigue the viewer.
This could be a good thing except that successivamante know about the poverty of the work. The scale and attention to detail have not been well implemented. I admire your passion, but in addition to anatomy books I strongly recommend you to browse a book of drapery, because you really need it. ; )

Also I would recommend you to study the interaction between solid and clothing. correct these details and you will see how this will improve your work. try it again

your friend
T.C.